Wednesday, March 2, 2011

4 of 5 Independence Process Blog for Project 2

                Luckily, our writing professor was nice enough to give us extra time to work on the final of our paper since our class schedule became a bit confusing.  This gave me a lot of time to go over my first draft and pick out the parts that didn’t work well and add in more detail to places it needed to go.  I have not gone back into my draft on the computer yet and cut out what I don’t need and put in the detail I do need.  I’m not sure that my paper will be long enough because it needs to be at least four pages.  I wrote down a lot of detail and new information on my draft so I am hoping everything works out.  Adding more quotes to my paper might be a good idea also so then I can elaborate on an idea off of the quote.

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