As I began to look over comments from others about my paper and the comments I made for myself, I was still unsure of what I wanted to add to my final paper. I knew I needed to add more detail because it was only two and a half pages and it had to be three. After reading over my paper many times, I began to find places here and there to add sentences to and make the paper even better. My favorite parts in my paper are the metaphors and similes, so I tried to add more of those. I really enjoy my paper because it is something I am actually passionate about. At first I was very unsure about writing a profile. However, when I knew I could write about the beach I became very excited. I think my profile turned out very well and I had fun writing it too.
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