Today in class we had a writing workshop for project number five. I was nervous to have others read my paper because I was unsure if I met the criteria of what a profile really needed to be. However, once I read the first persons paper in my group I felt a lot better because there’s was formatted like mine. Then, I read my paper and as I was reading I realized how much I really enjoyed my paper. After I was done reading it, the other two members in my writing workshop group told me they really like it also. They said it had good descriptions and was a well-written profile. They also said they could really tell I enjoyed the beach and knew it had to be a favorite place of mine. There were still a few things that needed to be worked on though. Sometimes in my paper I kept switching from the past tense to the present tense and I need to work on keeping the whole paper in the same tense. I also need to add another paragraph or so to make it three pages.
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